Wednesday, 20 January 2016

NW ED: Group rough cut feedback



Feedback received from our peers after a viewing of our rough cut.

What went well:
  • Very good continuity editing and sound
  • Good use of costume
  • Nice range of shots
  • Very effective use of mise-en-scene in set design of the psychos lair, very good location
  • Very good titles and simplistic font
  • Really liked the closing shot from outside the house
  • Great camera movement, map shots are the best
  • Good controlled lighting in the two scenes
  • Good dramatic hit at the end
  • Several very well framed shots
What could be improved:
  • Improve canted angle shot
  • Sound mixing for drama, tension and pace
  • Longer/more reaction shots
  • Non-diegetic sound
  • Too little time on the letter if the audience needs to read it
  • Use more silences

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